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Very good attention to detail. I find it helps with immersing the reader into the story making them feel like they are actually there.
Can't wait to see where this leads.
Five stars across the board.

So far so good, looks promising, I too like the detail, now waiting on part 2, hope you do not keep us hanging on too long

Hi swish87 - What a great story already! I'm really looking forward to see how it develops. Thanks for writing and posting - Peter

I'm impressed. You're setting up an interesting story that feels almost plausible(!) and stays away from cliches. Nice job!