The Pondskippers

[David]

Very good attention to detail. I find it helps with immersing the reader into the story making them feel like they are actually there.
Can't wait to see where this leads.
Five stars across the board.

[Izzitpvc]

So far so good, looks promising, I too like the detail, now waiting on part 2, hope you do not keep us hanging on too long

[Cagoule]

Hi swish87 - What a great story already! I'm really looking forward to see how it develops. Thanks for writing and posting - Peter

[latexstorm]

I'm impressed. You're setting up an interesting story that feels almost plausible(!) and stays away from cliches. Nice job!